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Posted by Chris B on 09/30/51 11:18
Also, I'm not deliberately critisise but..
"
Please help create grade 5 - 12 Math skill enhancement software.Inspired
by my baby sister and her friends.
Don't cry get Brayney Child Software
"
The grammer is absolutely appaling. The first sentence is a mouthful and
almost sounds like a series of random words, there should be a space
after the "." before "inspired", there should be a comma after "cry".
(Why would anyone cry anyway, you know that schools exist, right?)
If you can't even type properly on a website where you're asking for
money, what makes you think people are going to trust your software to
teach their kids?
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