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Posted by danny on 01/08/07 09:48
John Hosking wrote:
> danny wrote:
> > danny wrote:
> >
> >>Guys I'm just about to make it a whole lot different, so I would
> >>appreciate you continue your helpful feedback, thanks!
> >
> > It is now updated, please help by continuing your feed back.
> >
> Hi, Danny,
>
> *NOW* it looks like an 11-year-old's site... :-(
>
> Why a meaningless portal page?
>
> Why black? Why invisible blue links on the black background?
>
> On loading the real first page, there's a JavaScript error:
> Error: uncaught exception: Permission denied to call method
> Location.toString
>
> I can't imagine the artwork matches Runescape. The little green ivy
> leaves in the corners certainly don't seem to belong.
>
> The flash banner looks like it's, um, borrowed from somebody else's
> corporate site. Is that guy on the phone supposed to be a Runescape player?
>
> You have no need to use XHTML and shouldn't try. Stick with HTML.
> My browser and cursor are having trouble getting along when your page is
> loaded. Something weird is going on somewhere.
>
> The HTML is bad both on the "splash" page (nasty Microsoft crud) and on
> the template pages (table layouts with meaningless image and class names).
>
> It looks like you picked up a template somewhere (which doesn't really
> match your site's needs). I think you'd be better off starting from
> scratch; you'd learn more, and you could make the site look better.
>
> The two links to "Online Form" are special. Are people supposed to just
> type in their passwords there? The pages don't say what the forms are
> *for*. The forms need some more testing and debugging.
>
> I hope you have fun and learn a lot, but since you wanted feedback, I
> hope you can accept and understand that the site is not as good-looking
> as it could be. I think I actually liked the other version better!
>
> HTH
> --
> John
Um... is being like a 11 year old's page good or bad? Now you have
really challenged me! With my knowledge of website making I can't do
anything much more than this site and the old one, it would be nice if
you help me find a quality wysiwyg so I can get started while I improve
my HTML thanks...
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