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Posted by Matt Silberstein on 03/02/06 19:55
On Thu, 2 Mar 2006 17:57:12 +1300, in alt.html.critique , "Nik
Coughlin" <nrkn.com@gmail.com> in <44067b29@clear.net.nz> wrote:
>Hi,
>
>I would really like a critique of the site that I am working on at the
>moment. It is nearly done, though you may find a couple of pages with no
>real content.
>
>http://nrkn.com/fm/
>http://nrkn.com/fm/fm.css
>
>Thanks!
>
As others I generally like it, nice clean, good food related colors.
Small issues. First, the leftmost menu item should be the home page.
Second, if you have the room there is no reason for the "generosity
.... " to overlap the image. Third, the directory should have a menu of
some sort. Finally and weakest, I might experiment by putting a touch
of deeper, more primary colors. Food has a range of colors and if you
can get a bit of apple red and pepper green it would be great. I
suspect you can't do that and keep the clean look and the clean look
is more important, but the attempt might produce value.
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Matt Silberstein
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