Posted by MalcolmP on 01/01/07 13:21

>> Thank you nicely found
>> indeed it worked a treat,
>> all blown away now.
>>
>> note the seasonal ref in last line for Sally and for good
>> measure ;) HNY

> Note that the second line is short a syllable. :)

Oh ?I thought it was supposed to be 5, 7, 5 ??

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1) very approx cos it is a transliterated art form it would seem.
2) Either one of us can't count(**) or the other doesnt know how I
pronounce 'worked' :-!)
3)poetry is like music, it doesnt work on paper you've got to hum it, all
together now, after me 1, 2, 3. ;)
4) who cares, lol!
5) stop muttering from a sedentry position (as they say in the House),,
your offering is ,, ?

Heheee, all good fun, who'd'av believed it !
And there I was, being all worried that _I_ was going to be OT in my first
post !
Tried to be polite and got Spartacanned for my troubles.

>>> We don't get many attempts at haiku in here. ;)
>> Not enough syllables :-)
>That's why I said "attempts".

Point of order yr'onner, I wasn't attempting !
You really meant to say ",, get many inadvertent haikus ,," !

(**) It's the spirit that counts,,,

Now where were we
what's the plural of haiku,
mumble seasonal mutter

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