Posted by dorayme on 09/20/07 22:07

In article
<1190283014.470022.91930@50g2000hsm.googlegroups.com>,
Travis Newbury <TravisNewbury@hotmail.com> wrote:

> On Sep 19, 9:28 pm, windandwaves <nfranc...@gmail.com> wrote:
> > Hi Folk
> >
> > Can you please have a look at:http://www.winsborough.co.nz/and tell
> > me what you think.

> but I do have a problem with the content:
>
> "Winsborough Limited is a specialised organisational development
> business dedicated to raising organisational effectiveness through
> people. Our professional staff are organisational psychologists and
> experts in the area of organisational behaviour."
>
> Spell checker?
> specialised = specialized ?
> organisational = organizational ?
> behaviour = behavior ?
>
> Maybe it is just us Americans that think it is spelled wrong.

Now that you mention this sentence, never mind insisting on more
American spelling:

"a specialised organisational development business dedicated"?

(1) "dedicated" makes "specialised" redundant.

(2) "professional" when it goes on to say "psychologists" and
"experts"?

Perhaps OP not responsible for the text?

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dorayme

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