Posted by AGw. (Usenet) on 10/24/07 14:18

On Oct 24, 3:18 am, "Nik Coughlin" <nrkn....@gmail.com> wrote:

> Hi,
>
> http://devallenger.co.nz/
>
> Thanks!

Nitpicks:

The grey text in the bottom black box has very poor contrast against
the background, making it somewhat difficult to read.

Having the separate "Q&A" and "Contact" pages seems a bit redundant.

You seem to have quite a number of empty or redundant divs on each
page.

A matter of personal taste, perhaps, but the huge amount of black
space in the banner seems a bit unbalanced to me, almost as if there's
something missing.

The four women on the left are nice enough to look at, but why are
they there? Who are they? My first response was that they were
models used by whoever this company is, but since the first lady is
apparently the boss I'm left wondering if the others are staff
members. Confusing!

When I load the "Personal Image" page in Firefox I get an intermittent
problem with the diverseConsulting.png image: sometimes the text flows
round it, and sometimes the text treats it as background and creates a
confusing mess.

If "Personal Image" is your default index page for the domain name it
shouldn't be the second item in the menu at top, and shouldn't be
available as a menu option when it's the page being displayed.

"Landscape design" is hardly part of "interior design"! I'd also lose
the photo with the bright red toilet; it'll appeal to some but make
others think your client has absolutely no sense of taste!


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AGw.

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