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Posted by Ganesh on 12/02/06 03:53
Beauregard T. Shagnasty wrote:
> There is some questionable phrasing as well. Ex:
> "Compact design so required very less space."
> Perhaps: Compact design requires very little space.
> Too much use of the word "so".
The copy is given by the client.... I'm helpless.. I might ask the
client to get the copy writing redone, But I know he's stingy guy...
anyway I will surely let him know how the world will see these errors
as. There's lot of other grammatical error as well. Anyway thanks for
pointing out that. I've correct that error too.
Ganesh
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