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Posted by Jonathan N. Little on 03/15/07 14:00
Richard Formby wrote:
> John Hosking wrote:
>
>> al jones wrote:
>
>>> http://aljones.us/ab
>
>> Pain-in-the-neck detail: The drop shadow on the scissors is on the
>> lower-right (suggesting light coming from roughly the direction of the
>> lighthouse), but the drop shadow for the nearby letters are lower-left
>> (meaning there's another, conflicting light source in the upper right).
>
> Now that is getting *real* picky. I didn't even notice that.
>
> Probably because the drop-shadow on the letters makes my eyes cross so I
> avoid looking at that bit of the page :-)
>
> al, Lose the drop shadow. Very difficult to read. Make it crisp, eye
> catching. I find it eye avoiding.
>
> Ah, just noticed that bit of a line above the Ceremony. Scan artifact?
>
>
While we are getting picky, Al you need to redo your Lighthouse. You
have either overly compressed the image or saved it repeatedly in JPEG
format and introduced distracting JPEG artifacts, reminds me of
someone's Seagull. JPEG is a lossy compression format so each time your
edit and save in that format, information is lost and visual artifacts
become more pronounced.
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Take care,
Jonathan
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