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 Posted by John Hosking on 04/03/07 01:03 
F'ups set to alt.html.critique 
 
Nik Coughlin wrote: 
> Just implemented the html and css for a redesign of a game engine's site.  I  
> was given a photoshop image for the design, so while I'll pass along any  
> comments on the look and feel that I get, I didn't do that, and I'm more  
> interested in critiques on the html + css.  Obviously this is just a  
> template with no content in it, the links are just placeholders etc. The  
> existing content on the site will get plugged into it. 
>  
> Here's the page: 
> http://nrkn.com/elysium/page.php 
 
 
Hi, Nik 
 
Just a few quick comments as I *must* go to sleep. 
 
The reference graphic you're working from looks a bit blurry to me, but  
the graphics (upper-right) on your real page look even more so. Of  
course, maybe it's just because I'm really tired (or old :-) ) now. 
 
The page seems a wee bit sluggish. When I resize my browser (FF),  
there's a half-second delay while the page gets recalculated (or  
something) and then repainted. Don't know what this is. It's not my  
tiredness or age, because I can get other pages to react perkily. 
UPDATE: I've spent, oh, 15 minutes on this post and now, as I'm about to  
send, I see the page responding nicely. So maybe I hallucinated the  
slowness, or perhaps I'm the sluggish one. Nevermind. 
 
Sluggishness not so bad in IE6, but I see you're doing something special  
for it. 
 
Loading takes surprisingly long (about 6 seconds on ADSL 2500 Kbps).  
What will it be like with the actual content? 
 
Hey, it's getting cold in here; throw another DIV on the fire, will you? 
 
Okay, I see you're keen to have rounded corners. I guess the stretching  
of the graphics is what's bogging the response down. Don't know what to  
suggest here, sorry. 
 
The button graphics actually get *fainter* on hover, which I think is a  
novelty. It seems, er, not right to me, but I'm not a graphics person,  
and you've got one of those there with you, so don't mind me. I would  
prefer to see the captions for the buttons change for me as I resize  
text, but that's partly because they look blurry to me. 
 
I haven't studied your CSS long enough to find anything to criticize, so  
  probably it is both hunky and dory. 
 
I can't say I like the frizzy diagonal background graphic, but I guess  
that'll be mostly hidden be real content. Otherwise it looks really  
good. Certinaly more fresh than the current page. 
 
HTH. ZZzzz.. 
--  
John
 
  
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