Posted by windandwaves on 09/20/07 22:28

On Sep 21, 10:07 am, dorayme <doraymeRidT...@optusnet.com.au> wrote:
> In article
> <1190283014.470022.91...@50g2000hsm.googlegroups.com>,
> Travis Newbury <TravisNewb...@hotmail.com> wrote:
>
>
>
> > On Sep 19, 9:28 pm, windandwaves <nfranc...@gmail.com> wrote:
> > > Hi Folk
>
> > > Can you please have a look at:http://www.winsborough.co.nz/andtell
> > > me what you think.
> > but I do have a problem with the content:
>
> > "Winsborough Limited is a specialised organisational development
> > business dedicated to raising organisational effectiveness through
> > people. Our professional staff are organisational psychologists and
> > experts in the area of organisational behaviour."
>
> > Spell checker?
> > specialised = specialized ?
> > organisational = organizational ?
> > behaviour = behavior ?
>
> > Maybe it is just us Americans that think it is spelled wrong.
>
> Now that you mention this sentence, never mind insisting on more
> American spelling:
>
> "a specialised organisational development business dedicated"?
>
> (1) "dedicated" makes "specialised" redundant.
>
> (2) "professional" when it goes on to say "psychologists" and
> "experts"?
>
> Perhaps OP not responsible for the text?
>
> --
> dorayme

correct.... thank you for pointing it out though

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