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Posted by Jake on 12/21/05 20:22
In message <in4jq1p007jst6ptlldd9vq3n504euu3o5@4ax.com>, Ed Jay
<edMbj@aes-intl.com> writes
>ndc6025058@gmail.com wrote:
>
>>What can I say andy the world is full of people loving McDonalds and as
>>long as they do exist so do I :-D. Also if better to give a guy like me
>>$100 then to a guy how just know <HTML> and knows nothing about design
>>and concept.
>>
>>Again no offence or anything personal.
>>
>I appreciate and welcome what you are trying to do. But, after reading
>your posts and reviewing your example sites (not the code) I note several
>spelling errors and departures from typical English usage. What good does
>it do to save money in basic coding only to have to spend my extra time
>locating and resolving such errors?
>
As Ed points out, there are a number of spelling, grammar and usage
errors on the pages that distracts from the overall (quite attractive)
design.
I.e.
HOME PAGE
========
vaued --> valued
memeber --> member
inlcludes --> includes
Doccumentation --> Documentation
reqire --> require
and 'lead developer' should be 'lead developers'
and '::-' should be just ':'
and 'develop' should be 'developer'
(also, I notice that links disappear when I put the mouse over them --
not a good idea)
CONTACT PAGE
==========
Down at the bottom left-hand corner of the page I can see:
span>.
CLIENTS PAGE
=========
Down at the bottom left-hand corner of the page I can see:
n>.
I was wondering whether this was a general problem so I checked one of
your portfolio sites, the Grand Prince Hotel -- with the following
results:
opening page
==========
luxerious --> luxurious
ornamentaly --> ornamentally
equiped --> equipped
mordern --> modern
travelers --> travellers
magnificant --> magnificent
personalied --> personalised
hermony --> harmony
fulfill --> fulfil
........... and 'pleaseCONTACT US!' should be 'please CONTACT US!'
......... and "it's" should be "its"
......... 'five star hotel,' should be 'five star hotels;'
......... 'mouth watering' should be 'mouth-watering'
......... 'meet your all expectations' should be 'meet all your
expectations'
........ 'on an affordable price.' should be 'at an affordable price.'
To be taken seriously as a web site producer, you do need to take care
that the text is up to the standards that your visitors -- and clients
-- expect.
I'd suggest that you put all your copy through an English-language
spelling/grammar checking program (such as that with MS Word).
Regards.
--
Jake (jake@gododdin.demon.co.uk -- just a 'spam trap' mail address)
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