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Posted by Nik Coughlin on 11/23/85 11:41
Matt Silberstein wrote:
> On Thu, 2 Mar 2006 17:57:12 +1300, in alt.html.critique , "Nik
> Coughlin" <nrkn.com@gmail.com> in <44067b29@clear.net.nz> wrote:
>
>> Hi,
>>
>> I would really like a critique of the site that I am working on at
>> the moment. It is nearly done, though you may find a couple of
>> pages with no real content.
>>
>> http://nrkn.com/fm/
>> http://nrkn.com/fm/fm.css
>>
>> Thanks!
>>
> As others I generally like it, nice clean, good food related colors.
> Small issues. First, the leftmost menu item should be the home page.
> Second, if you have the room there is no reason for the "generosity
> ... " to overlap the image. Third, the directory should have a menu of
> some sort. Finally and weakest, I might experiment by putting a touch
> of deeper, more primary colors. Food has a range of colors and if you
> can get a bit of apple red and pepper green it would be great. I
> suspect you can't do that and keep the clean look and the clean look
> is more important, but the attempt might produce value.
Hi, thanks for your advice. The leftmost menu item is now the home page.
All the colours except for the blues were taken from food images, and the
blues were taken from sea/sky. I've added a menu to both the directory and
the testimonials page now.
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