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Posted by dorayme on 03/24/06 03:25
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<4422f788$0$4662$5a62ac22@per-qv1-newsreader-01.iinet.net.au>,
"ivan" <ivand@netspeed.com.au> wrote:
> I have made Website that I would like feed back on
> http://lingeriedirect.com.au/
>
> please give me feedback as this is my first website.. I would like to know
> ways to improve it.
I'd say ... er ... put your source through a validator. You will
see a few errors and things that you need to be conscious of.
Your site appears quite radically differently in different
browsers, in Safari, there is no background colour in the left
links (fine by me), but in iCab there is a dark one to the point
of illegibility for the link text...
Just a quick look at the page your "enter" leads to, I am sure I
saw the wrong doctype (you are using frames and need a different
one...)
There are just two many issues about your mark-up to go into...
about the appearance, it is not too bad. You need a tute. Try
http://www.htmldog.com/
I think you should really have some darker background to the
canvas outside the contents, perhaps making the contents more
consciously stand apart (perhaps also add a border to the
content, ie, all the info, pics and text and thumbnails). The
white bg of the contents is ok. The way it looks now on a big
screen, it looks sort of lost in space...
Is this enough advice get me a phone number of one of the girls?
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dorayme
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