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Posted by Nicolo Nyo Armato on 11/23/99 11:41
Nik Coughlin ha scritto:
> Hi,
>
> I would really like a critique of the site that I am working on at the
> moment. It is nearly done, though you may find a couple of pages with no
> real content.
>
> http://nrkn.com/fm/
> http://nrkn.com/fm/fm.css
Haiii! Haiiiiiii!!! Chottooooo!!! >_<
I do not really know the target level of the company and your level in
web production but:
- General visual guidelines are very far, close to Mars, clean but very
amateurish IMHO.
- Brand Logo on Venus as well, logo restyling is required IMHO
- Colors are quite good and quite bad at the same time, there are too
much colour and no really good connection between them. MULTI-IMHO
- I didn't any w3c check but ppls around said ok, so code is valid at
least :) It's a good start ;D W3C-IMHO
It's a very good work for amateur, acceptable-looking for novice
professional design, bad for skilled professional, "impossible to say"
for highly skilled award winning professional , make your choice :)
Shake your mind and peace \/, man. Gambatte kudasai ne ^.~
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Minnasan, sayonara yo,
Nicolò Nyo Armato
www.nyosources.com
One-million parsec beyond the brain evolution, being a perfect guy,
learning everything and taking human lifestyle to the limit.
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