Create Mental Movies In The Mind of Your Reader
Category: Copy Writing - sales copy | Date: 2003-05-14 |
I love things that have dramatic effects on the mind. And nothing has more power than writing in such a way as to cause Moving Pictures and Images to run through the readers mind.
Writing that is filled with descriptive nouns and verbs that convey action to the reader are the secret to making your reader see,feel and act on what you say!
Use Nouns to create specific pictures in your readers mind.Specific ideas and descriptions create mental pictures that the reader can absorb instantly.
Abstract ideas create no such images and are therefore impotent in sales copy. They are weak and make reading boring.
What claim below has more impact for you?
"Increase Your Profits Substantially And Quickly With Our Method!" or...
"Make 247% More Money In Less Than 6 Weeks!"
You can easily see that the second claim carries much more impact.Strive to make every sentence in a sales letter clear, direct and specific!
Money is a definite thing, you can touch it, feel it and see it in
your minds eye. 247% is specific while substantially is weak and tells you nothing.
Never write with vague language that the reader can not instantly grasp!
"I Lost 18 Pounds of Fat in 3 Weeks"
is more powerful than
"I lost a ton of weight in a short time"
"I Rake In At Least $833 In Cash Every Day!"
is better than
"My Income Increases Every Day!"
Be specific, clear and direct!
About the author
(c) 1999 By Allen Says.
Allen is the head of the Internet Marketing Warriors. If youd like to learn more about Allen and his Private, Members Only group visit:
http://www.thewarriorgroup.com/cgi-bin/a.pl?warriors&3427
This article provided by the InfoZone Archives at: http://www.MakingProfit.com
:To contact see details below.
allen@privatesites.com
http://www.privatesites.com/warriors/Oh1999/
Writing that is filled with descriptive nouns and verbs that convey action to the reader are the secret to making your reader see,feel and act on what you say!
Use Nouns to create specific pictures in your readers mind.Specific ideas and descriptions create mental pictures that the reader can absorb instantly.
Abstract ideas create no such images and are therefore impotent in sales copy. They are weak and make reading boring.
What claim below has more impact for you?
"Increase Your Profits Substantially And Quickly With Our Method!" or...
"Make 247% More Money In Less Than 6 Weeks!"
You can easily see that the second claim carries much more impact.Strive to make every sentence in a sales letter clear, direct and specific!
Money is a definite thing, you can touch it, feel it and see it in
your minds eye. 247% is specific while substantially is weak and tells you nothing.
Never write with vague language that the reader can not instantly grasp!
"I Lost 18 Pounds of Fat in 3 Weeks"
is more powerful than
"I lost a ton of weight in a short time"
"I Rake In At Least $833 In Cash Every Day!"
is better than
"My Income Increases Every Day!"
Be specific, clear and direct!
About the author
(c) 1999 By Allen Says.
Allen is the head of the Internet Marketing Warriors. If youd like to learn more about Allen and his Private, Members Only group visit:
http://www.thewarriorgroup.com/cgi-bin/a.pl?warriors&3427
This article provided by the InfoZone Archives at: http://www.MakingProfit.com
:To contact see details below.
allen@privatesites.com
http://www.privatesites.com/warriors/Oh1999/
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