Long Copy Works Better - Or Is It Short Copy?
| Category: Copy Writing | Date: 2001-06-12 |
Ahhh! The never-ending battle. Im sure youve heard both statements made with passion. Those that believe you must walk your customer through each and every benefit preach, "Long copy sells better!" Proponents of this copywriting method say customers need to be "lead" or "teased" into reading the next paragraph and the next. Finally, when you have them drooling, you reveal the punch line.
On the other hand, advocates of short copy state that consumers today have extremely short attention spans. Copy thats "to-the-point" is a necessity in order to make a sale at all. According to these experts, the long, drawn-out copy gets tossed right out the window by busy, impatient readers. Feed it to them fast or youll lose them to the competition. So exactly whos right? They both are!
No, Im not being politically correct and Im not avoiding the issue. The honest truth is that all people in the world do not communicate in the same way. Due to this fact, no one copywriting approach will work with every single product or service. As with every other aspect of advertising, you must look to your target audience for the answer.
Ive used this analogy for years... when you begin to write a letter you do not sit down and write then decide who you will mail the letter to. Before you put pen to paper you know who the recipient of the message will be. You know their communication style and how to best phrase the information so it will be well received. The same applies to copywriting.
Lets say, just as an example, that your target audience consists of small business owners. These business owners happen to all be Certified Public Accountants. Just from this tiny bit of information I can tell you the target group is extremely busy, is very detail oriented and has a bottom line mentality. These people are generally analytical thinkers. Based on these facts, I would not write copy to this target audience in long form. Why? It would most likely not be read.
The group above communicates in short, precise bursts. They are looking for the bottom line first and an explanation afterwards. The most effective way to get the attention of this group (in writing) is to keep it short, sweet and to the point. Otherwise you will lose them in what they consider to be a "bunch of fluff". These folks are definitely members of the short copy group.
So who belongs to the long copy group? People making an investmentfor one. I dont mean an investment in the stock market (so to speak). Im talking about people who are going to make a large investment of time or money in anything. People who are thinking of joining an affiliate program or multilevel marketing program would be receptive to long form copy. Those who are going to invest many hours in a self-help process would appreciate long copy. Let me explain.
When people are going to invest time or money (or both) in something they get nervous. Customers need to be reassured that they are making the right decision. They need to be reminded of why they need to purchase this product or service. A wealth of information makes these prospective clients more secure about their decision.
Yes, there are other target groups that would benefit from both long form and short form copy. There are a multitude of them to say the least. As the advertiser, your job is to discover which type of communication style will be received well by your prospects. (A company named Myers-Briggs offers an excellent course on defining communication styles. Ive participated in their training and found it to be highly beneficial.)
So what about the writers who swear their copywriting approach will cause major increases in response rates? What about the writers who say their method works for any product or service?
"But this guy said his copywriting style caused a 50% increase in the direct mail response rate of a jewelry store." Ive heard this at least a hundred times. Maybe it did. However, Ive never been a real fan of statistics when used to prove a point such as this.
There are two items in the above statement that cause me concern. The first is the percentage. We dont know how many direct mail pieces were originally mailed. Perhaps on the first campaign 50 envelopes were sent. Direct mail normally provides a 1-3% response rate. If we allow the 3% in our example, that would mean the original campaign received 1.5 responses. A 50% increase means the mailing using the new copywriting style received 2.25 responses. Technically, that is a 50% increase even if only 2 people responded.
The second alarm that goes off is the phrase "response rate". Most advertisers dont understand this statement. Response rate does not equal sales. Response rate equals responses. Literally, if a person calls to ask a question in relation to the mailing it is considered a response - even if that person never purchases. I caution you to beware of those with "one size fits all" copy- writing approaches.
Yes, there are big names out there that will tell you that one particular style of copy works to sell each and every product and service. Again, technically, I suppose they are right. However, it does not sell to each and every target audience member. If you dont get through to the target audience, the copy - regardless of whos style it is - is a waste of time and effort.
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On the other hand, advocates of short copy state that consumers today have extremely short attention spans. Copy thats "to-the-point" is a necessity in order to make a sale at all. According to these experts, the long, drawn-out copy gets tossed right out the window by busy, impatient readers. Feed it to them fast or youll lose them to the competition. So exactly whos right? They both are!
No, Im not being politically correct and Im not avoiding the issue. The honest truth is that all people in the world do not communicate in the same way. Due to this fact, no one copywriting approach will work with every single product or service. As with every other aspect of advertising, you must look to your target audience for the answer.
Ive used this analogy for years... when you begin to write a letter you do not sit down and write then decide who you will mail the letter to. Before you put pen to paper you know who the recipient of the message will be. You know their communication style and how to best phrase the information so it will be well received. The same applies to copywriting.
Lets say, just as an example, that your target audience consists of small business owners. These business owners happen to all be Certified Public Accountants. Just from this tiny bit of information I can tell you the target group is extremely busy, is very detail oriented and has a bottom line mentality. These people are generally analytical thinkers. Based on these facts, I would not write copy to this target audience in long form. Why? It would most likely not be read.
The group above communicates in short, precise bursts. They are looking for the bottom line first and an explanation afterwards. The most effective way to get the attention of this group (in writing) is to keep it short, sweet and to the point. Otherwise you will lose them in what they consider to be a "bunch of fluff". These folks are definitely members of the short copy group.
So who belongs to the long copy group? People making an investmentfor one. I dont mean an investment in the stock market (so to speak). Im talking about people who are going to make a large investment of time or money in anything. People who are thinking of joining an affiliate program or multilevel marketing program would be receptive to long form copy. Those who are going to invest many hours in a self-help process would appreciate long copy. Let me explain.
When people are going to invest time or money (or both) in something they get nervous. Customers need to be reassured that they are making the right decision. They need to be reminded of why they need to purchase this product or service. A wealth of information makes these prospective clients more secure about their decision.
Yes, there are other target groups that would benefit from both long form and short form copy. There are a multitude of them to say the least. As the advertiser, your job is to discover which type of communication style will be received well by your prospects. (A company named Myers-Briggs offers an excellent course on defining communication styles. Ive participated in their training and found it to be highly beneficial.)
So what about the writers who swear their copywriting approach will cause major increases in response rates? What about the writers who say their method works for any product or service?
"But this guy said his copywriting style caused a 50% increase in the direct mail response rate of a jewelry store." Ive heard this at least a hundred times. Maybe it did. However, Ive never been a real fan of statistics when used to prove a point such as this.
There are two items in the above statement that cause me concern. The first is the percentage. We dont know how many direct mail pieces were originally mailed. Perhaps on the first campaign 50 envelopes were sent. Direct mail normally provides a 1-3% response rate. If we allow the 3% in our example, that would mean the original campaign received 1.5 responses. A 50% increase means the mailing using the new copywriting style received 2.25 responses. Technically, that is a 50% increase even if only 2 people responded.
The second alarm that goes off is the phrase "response rate". Most advertisers dont understand this statement. Response rate does not equal sales. Response rate equals responses. Literally, if a person calls to ask a question in relation to the mailing it is considered a response - even if that person never purchases. I caution you to beware of those with "one size fits all" copy- writing approaches.
Yes, there are big names out there that will tell you that one particular style of copy works to sell each and every product and service. Again, technically, I suppose they are right. However, it does not sell to each and every target audience member. If you dont get through to the target audience, the copy - regardless of whos style it is - is a waste of time and effort.
About the Author
Targeted writing that gets better results! Ad copy, press releases & ghostwriting at attractandkeepcustomers.com
:To contact see details below.
webinfo@attractandkeepcustomers.com
http://www.attractandkeepcustomers.com
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